IELTS Writing Task 2 (Essay 01)

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Writing Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:

The multiple hours spent playing video games has led to the decline in health and physical fitness of youth across the world.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Write at least 250 words.

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Model Answer

Many teenagers today are addicted to video games and it is not uncommon to see the youth spending long hours playing in arcades or wit their game consoles. Video games are so widespread thus they have no language or cultural barriers. This essay will examine how excessively playing video games causes health problems for the youth worldwide.

Video games can become addictive. Youngsters are unconsciously hooked on the games and would even continuously play without sleep or food. This can cause physical bodily harm because of lack of sleep or eating disorders. Also, looking at game consoles or television screens for long hours will harm their eyesight and cause numbness or reduce their muscular reflexes. Aside from that, video games can cause them to become lazy and not want to go out for physical exercises.

Moreover, a majority of video games are violent in nature. They involve killing or shooting enemies. Studies have shown that teenagers, who play these violent games for a long time, tend to be more physically aggressive and may easily get agitated. After long hours of playing video games, many teenagers tend to see themselves as the characters in the games they play and detach themselves from reality. There have been reported cases about some kids killing other people because of the illusion that they were the character in video games.

Studies have also shown that teenagers who play long hours of video games tend to be less sociable and always keep to themselves. This lack of social interaction may lead them to isolation and in worse cases, may cause depression.

In summary, playing video games for long hours has led to a series of physical and mental health problems among the youth. In serious cases, it can cause addiction and depression. Thus, children should not spend too many hours playing video games.

(309 Words)

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